New poem, feedback?

Question:Complete Without You

you were my missing link
my lost puzzle piece
at least thats what i thought

how wrong i was
because truth be told
you were stealing me bit by bit

i was my missing link
i had to find my puzzle piece
and now i've found it
and i'm complete without you

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Complete Without You

you were my missing link
my lost puzzle piece
at least thats what i thought

how wrong i was
because truth be told
you were stealing me bit by bit

i was my missing link
i had to find my puzzle piece
and now i've found it
and i'm complete without you

Makes perfect sense to me
I really understand it, simple, yet meaningful

May I say a constructive comment (just my opinion)
the "and" words I would eliminate and one "I"

I was my missing link
Had to find my puzzle piece
Now that I've found it
I'm complete without you

Thanks for sharing, I really liked it.

pretty good. nice analogies.

this is really cute i like it. i am jealous i wish i could write poetry. I'm doing poetry in school now and i suck.

...kind of redundant.
didn't make much sense.
sorry.

I like the idea though, maybe try to elaborate more, and make it more meaningful?