Something fun for Sunday morning, How do u like this.?

Question:"control"

I have an affliction, not fatal it's true,
there is no cure, just large doses of you.
Sometimes our needs are right in our face,
your bewitching body in leather and lace.

I like my pleasure at times with some pain,
contrary to opinion, I am completely sane.
Tied down precisely, controlled just by you,
you take me over like I knew you would do.

People who read this might think me a loon,
I'm somewhat different, march to my own tune.
Just two grown adults, consenting you see,
not for everyone, but it sets my soul free.

Intredpidly subjected to your every wish,
my limits are rumors, just another to squish..
One mans pure pain, I've found to be pleasure,
with just you my love, I've found all that I treasure.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "control"

I have an affliction, not fatal it's true,
there is no cure, just large doses of you.
Sometimes our needs are right in our face,
your bewitching body in leather and lace.

I like my pleasure at times with some pain,
contrary to opinion, I am completely sane.
Tied down precisely, controlled just by you,
you take me over like I knew you would do.

People who read this might think me a loon,
I'm somewhat different, march to my own tune.
Just two grown adults, consenting you see,
not for everyone, but it sets my soul free.

Intredpidly subjected to your every wish,
my limits are rumors, just another to squish..
One mans pure pain, I've found to be pleasure,
with just you my love, I've found all that I treasure.

not group sex
just a personal preference between two consenting adults
Thank you my prince your words are so ......
well tempting......

group sex

Not bad, not bad at all; The title isn't all that informative and some of the rhyme seems forced (e.g. second line fourth stanza), but if you wrote this for someone I'd bet they'd love it.

Very good wording and expresses more than just one opinion on this issue. Great job and fun to read.

you seem to be writing more and more slightly erotic poetry lately...what happened to your dark, deep, soul gripping poetry? i miss it...that was the poetry i fell in love with....but still a good poem...i like the first stanza and the fourth stanza...
~Grasshopper
~~Hara Kantana

You're full of fun and games - lol.

I liked your poem and yes you are full of fun and games.lucky lady in deed.

i'm intrigued to know how "Just two grown adults" can be interpreted as "group sex"...

This is very good, Anything between two consenting adults is no ones business. I also wondered about the group sex thing, but maybe he was trying to get an invitation? I also found it kind of interesting that Y/A was helping you out some...the ads to the right of your poem were none other than....pain!!

I loved your poem and it was quite interesting.Sounds like you know how to have fun...sigh.