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Position:Home>Poetry> Tired....Poem?Question:Let me know what you guys think!! The present is too depressing to stand The past is too painful to look back on The future is too scary to look forward to Lost in the world with no direction. Under the street signs, I have lost my way Always in the darkness never seeing the light Tired of always searching and never finding Tired of being in plain sight and never being found. Loosing patience patching the wholes that make me empty Filling the endless pit that drains my energy. Tired of caring too much, and not knowing how to stop Tired of showing only the emotions you want to see Pretending to be something I’m not for your benefit. Tired of climbing the mountain that expands into eternity And falling into the pit that is my destiny. Tired of roaming the streets alone with no direction Tired of being with someone with no emotion. Tired of not being good enough for you Never being adequate for your needs Tired of being too good for you and not knowing the difference Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Let me know what you guys think!! The present is too depressing to stand The past is too painful to look back on The future is too scary to look forward to Lost in the world with no direction. Under the street signs, I have lost my way Always in the darkness never seeing the light Tired of always searching and never finding Tired of being in plain sight and never being found. Loosing patience patching the wholes that make me empty Filling the endless pit that drains my energy. Tired of caring too much, and not knowing how to stop Tired of showing only the emotions you want to see Pretending to be something I’m not for your benefit. Tired of climbing the mountain that expands into eternity And falling into the pit that is my destiny. Tired of roaming the streets alone with no direction Tired of being with someone with no emotion. Tired of not being good enough for you Never being adequate for your needs Tired of being too good for you and not knowing the difference That gave me chills at some parts! It makes total sense! I like the part where you wrote,"Tired of you being appreciated, without even doing anything Tired of being underappreciated for doing everything." and,"But mostly, I’m tired from being tired of tired." 10/10. Awesome poem. you're a great poet! EEEK! 9.5 outta 10, i'm LOVING it! zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz im tired of reading! great man, that's probably one of the best ive seen in my life!! Very good job! Sorry dude but I am getting tired just reading it.. Most far reaching and out of the world. I think that like the person, I'll give you 9.5 too. As the best ranter! |