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Position:Home>Poetry> Classical verses, any thought, gentlemen?Question:'Roses are mine’ O’ pretty, dim soul of youth! Thy eager judgment, I canst overlook The companion in haste that thou, pined Mystified mere by the pricey ring and bouquet But how did thee, neglect? Un-presented, yet mature Roses were mine! Hence thee, at the expense of my esteem, Accepted stranger thine as ‘I do’ thine utterance In the Cathedral Ceremony There, when celebrated all and sundry Except the flora, withered yet again Roses were mine! And albeit thee delay Making out the love- genuine and fake And resolve to correct Thee, do make haste For thou art mine, by the right I owe ─‘Roses were mine’! ? Emran 2004 All rights reserved Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: 'Roses are mine’ O’ pretty, dim soul of youth! Thy eager judgment, I canst overlook The companion in haste that thou, pined Mystified mere by the pricey ring and bouquet But how did thee, neglect? Un-presented, yet mature Roses were mine! Hence thee, at the expense of my esteem, Accepted stranger thine as ‘I do’ thine utterance In the Cathedral Ceremony There, when celebrated all and sundry Except the flora, withered yet again Roses were mine! And albeit thee delay Making out the love- genuine and fake And resolve to correct Thee, do make haste For thou art mine, by the right I owe ─‘Roses were mine’! ? Emran 2004 All rights reserved Good effort, but when you write in archaic English, you have to be perfect. There are several grammatical mistakes in your poem, as for instance "I canst": "canst" is the second person singular, not the first. Read more poems from the 16th and 17th centuries. This site is also very useful: http://members.shaw.ca/hai-etlik/archaic... Nah. Rhymless, rhythmless. A 'classic'? Oh please. All rights reserved? Good idea. i dont liie this archaic language that is not used today. why do u address this q to gentlemen only? do u not value the opinion of ladies?! if not, why not!? Why would you do this? Poetry needs rhyming words, your thoughts are great You are the third polished poet I've read today. I have a week off to play on Yahoo. I will look for more of your work. Read my bio. TD Standing O! This is an unconvincing, rambling piece of not very well-written prose. Why you've decided to write it in obviously fake archaic style is beyond me. "Classical verses"? Is that a joke? I will now singen, if I can, The armes, and also the man Thar first came, through his destiny, Fugitive of Troy Country, In Italy |