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Position:Home>Poetry> What think'st thou of my sonnet?Question:I'm not an English major, a novelsit, a published author (not yet, but close), or one skilled in the theories and aspects of poetic literature...But i write. I'm 16. I'd like to know what you think. Sonnet XXXVI Could storms? or fire? or hunger drawn tempests Release me from this state of love I bide? Are there tornadoes strong that could persist Through walls of love we’ve built and gain inside? Be there a fire so fierce—that summer’s sun Would wither like the trail of candle light— To best our love and prove we’ve come undone? Or would we stand been tested by all might? I pray that we be subject to them all And prove our love to win the wicked date. From every deathly shower Death will fall Unto love’s feet and there recriminate. In the event that Death will fall below Our love will be an upspring of the foe. By Jacob Walter Wilson. Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I'm not an English major, a novelsit, a published author (not yet, but close), or one skilled in the theories and aspects of poetic literature...But i write. I'm 16. I'd like to know what you think. Sonnet XXXVI Could storms? or fire? or hunger drawn tempests Release me from this state of love I bide? Are there tornadoes strong that could persist Through walls of love we’ve built and gain inside? Be there a fire so fierce—that summer’s sun Would wither like the trail of candle light— To best our love and prove we’ve come undone? Or would we stand been tested by all might? I pray that we be subject to them all And prove our love to win the wicked date. From every deathly shower Death will fall Unto love’s feet and there recriminate. In the event that Death will fall below Our love will be an upspring of the foe. By Jacob Walter Wilson. God damn Your good! Damn good. APPLAUSE IS GIVEN TO THEE AND ITS CAPTURE SHALL ENDURE KUDOS KUDOS KUDOS TIS I WHO IS HONORED TO HAVE READ SUCH WORDS NEIGH HONORED WOULD ONLY BE A FAULTER ENTHRALLED TO THIS EXTENT DAMN GOOD. keep it up I'm awestruck. Totally awesome jeez, i'm put to shame again. TWO TIMES IN A DAY, Gosh. I love to write and that makes me feel very lowly. I LOOOOVVVVEEEEE IIIIITTTTT!!! WWWOOOOWWW!!! You totally are gonna be published some day! SOON! I wish I could say the same for myself. I. Am. So. Glad. I. Got. To. Read. IT! THANKZ! amazing dude! incredible! gah! outdone! hehe =] i tried a sonnet the other day. i ended up with 15 lines...shame on me. =P yours is good. well done. i'll have to try again... |