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Position:Home>Poetry> How Do You Like this Counting Poem for Children?Question:My One Two Poem One You are the One One Two Me and You One Two and Three Can't you count to four! After four comes five Queen bee stuck in the hive Five and six Sticks and bricks Seven and Eight Heaven and Earth Nine and Ten Count back to ten Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: My One Two Poem One You are the One One Two Me and You One Two and Three Can't you count to four! After four comes five Queen bee stuck in the hive Five and six Sticks and bricks Seven and Eight Heaven and Earth Nine and Ten Count back to ten i like it. i think you can pull it off if you do a good rhythm. but i dont like the part were it says hevan and earth that teaches the kids hevan is real. I don't like it. Not catchy enough for kids to remember. It has no rhythm and kids won't catch onto it like one two buckle my shoe type of thing. Sorry.....back to the drawing board for you. I would agree, not enough rhythm. Sorry, I don't know how you could change it, as I am no poet. I actually thought it was pretty cool, but you need to work on the rhythm a bit yea its not catchy, fix the part at the end, and the "cant you count to four" part, also the heaven and earth thing not good |