A poem written from a good friend of mine, care to read?

Question:Un amour fran?ais (An english-french poem)

Travel away to another world
Under the Eiffel Tower I adore
Hearing the whispers of my beloved
Saying: 'Je t'aime, mon amour.'

Flee goes my hair around, I'm on the top
Champane flows, the wind blows caressing me
Sharing laughter, happy to see
All my dear friends 'Mes amis'.

Soon I must return
To my home I'll go
I'll miss my friends and my love
Both are my life: 'Mes trésors'.

Memories from the most romantic place
Friendhip and love combined and more
'Farewell' I hear 'Bon voyage'
Oh! ...My sweet gentleman 'Adieu, mon amour'.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Un amour fran?ais (An english-french poem)

Travel away to another world
Under the Eiffel Tower I adore
Hearing the whispers of my beloved
Saying: 'Je t'aime, mon amour.'

Flee goes my hair around, I'm on the top
Champane flows, the wind blows caressing me
Sharing laughter, happy to see
All my dear friends 'Mes amis'.

Soon I must return
To my home I'll go
I'll miss my friends and my love
Both are my life: 'Mes trésors'.

Memories from the most romantic place
Friendhip and love combined and more
'Farewell' I hear 'Bon voyage'
Oh! ...My sweet gentleman 'Adieu, mon amour'.

That's beautiful!

nice use of language(s)