Can yu tell me what yu think? i know its kinda long...? [[FIXED]] [[YES I WROTE

Question:TEN POINTS: the most creative answer as to what this makes yu think of or how this makes yu feel:

hurting, worrying
story of my life
i keep things to myself
so i dont let out whats inside
and maybe if i stay boxed up
my problems will fade away
tell you anything and everything
is what you always say
at times you seem to push me
to find out why i cry
i cry because i cant make it
give me time my tears will dry
your voice makes me shiver
your kisses make me weak
theres a limit for self pity
i feel ive long since reached my peak
when bitter thoughts of suicide
creep into my mind
your the only thing that keeps me here
you help me every single time
i live in a house with the devil
grandpa just couldnt keep his hands still
he touched the little girl already
no worries on how she'd feel
she tells him to stop and he just laughs
he said it feels good so hold still
and when she said she'd tell her mommy
he said she doesnt need to know and never will.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: TEN POINTS: the most creative answer as to what this makes yu think of or how this makes yu feel:

hurting, worrying
story of my life
i keep things to myself
so i dont let out whats inside
and maybe if i stay boxed up
my problems will fade away
tell you anything and everything
is what you always say
at times you seem to push me
to find out why i cry
i cry because i cant make it
give me time my tears will dry
your voice makes me shiver
your kisses make me weak
theres a limit for self pity
i feel ive long since reached my peak
when bitter thoughts of suicide
creep into my mind
your the only thing that keeps me here
you help me every single time
i live in a house with the devil
grandpa just couldnt keep his hands still
he touched the little girl already
no worries on how she'd feel
she tells him to stop and he just laughs
he said it feels good so hold still
and when she said she'd tell her mommy
he said she doesnt need to know and never will.

Wow. This is epic. This poem really tells a story about who you are and what you represent. This is awesome. Aometimes it takes something beautiful for the things that hurt us the most to get out. There is a poetry site you can go to full of poetry like this. There, you can get advice, read other poes, and embark on a great journey

http://thedeathroses.proboards102.com

its too long

yet very sad

Sounds like you have put all your bad experience into words. Being sexually abuse is a crime. You are a child and it's not your fault. You need to let someone know.

this is good