Is this ok you think for a poem,my spelling is very bad so please bare with it?

Question:My love for you

is deep and blue as the ocean to the skies

when i think of you i see a rose

a red rose

you are the engine in my life that makes me start

everyday

for always and forever

i love cherish you as if i could never feel this way

i feel for you

to the end

i'll spend

every loving

moment with you.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: My love for you

is deep and blue as the ocean to the skies

when i think of you i see a rose

a red rose

you are the engine in my life that makes me start

everyday

for always and forever

i love cherish you as if i could never feel this way

i feel for you

to the end

i'll spend

every loving

moment with you.

For just starting out, it's ok. You don't always have to rhyme.

The best advise, let the words just flow out of you onto the paper. You can always go back and spell check after typing it in.

You're on a roll, don't stop now!

The line: "you are the engine in my life that makes me start" isn't poetic at all. It sounds choppy to me. It's like every line is from a different idea. Also, the form is inconsistent. Don't stop the flow of your thoughts. Write everything that pops into your head. Then edit after you have taken out every emotion from your system. It works for me every time.

You should never expect anyone to put up with incorrect spelling or grammar. It's unacceptable, and it's the writer's job to put out his or her best work.