What do you think of my poem ??

Question:Do you miss her when she’s not there
Or wish she wasn’t there at all
Do you know deep down you really care
Or she there to catch you when you fall
Do you treasure the memorise you have together
Or is she just something to pass time
Do you wish you’ll be together forever
Or is she just another rhyme

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Do you miss her when she’s not there
Or wish she wasn’t there at all
Do you know deep down you really care
Or she there to catch you when you fall
Do you treasure the memorise you have together
Or is she just something to pass time
Do you wish you’ll be together forever
Or is she just another rhyme

WOW. this is good. I really don't know what to say to this.

Ok, now i know, KEEP WRITING

i like it...it seems this poem is written for a lot of us.......

you wrote that yourself?thats a really good poem.