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Position:Home>Poetry> Does this poem make sense? :S?Question:You have come into my life and taken over a part of me With your monstrous ways of dealing things carelessly Every time I try to do something right You prevent me from freeing my soul by suppressing anything containing light Abusing my soul and taking over my mind You fill my essence with feelings that are so unkind I want freedom from fighting, I want to feel right But you give me horrendous ideas that keep me awake all night You’re my sub-conscious temptation That prevents me from following the path of redemption Restraining the prerogative to do things my way You have fulfilled your notion to lead me astray Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: You have come into my life and taken over a part of me With your monstrous ways of dealing things carelessly Every time I try to do something right You prevent me from freeing my soul by suppressing anything containing light Abusing my soul and taking over my mind You fill my essence with feelings that are so unkind I want freedom from fighting, I want to feel right But you give me horrendous ideas that keep me awake all night You’re my sub-conscious temptation That prevents me from following the path of redemption Restraining the prerogative to do things my way You have fulfilled your notion to lead me astray More than many. Very nice. Is it contradictory? Good conscience V's the bad? yes yes very nice Remeber what you told me get a life get a doctor get a life and like you told that girl stick to math that is all she going to be good at |