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Question:You have come into my life and taken over a part of me
With your monstrous ways of dealing things carelessly
Every time I try to do something right
You prevent me from freeing my soul by suppressing anything containing light
Abusing my soul and taking over my mind
You fill my essence with feelings that are so unkind
I want freedom from fighting, I want to feel right
But you give me horrendous ideas that keep me awake all night
You’re my sub-conscious temptation
That prevents me from following the path of redemption
Restraining the prerogative to do things my way
You have fulfilled your notion to lead me astray


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: You have come into my life and taken over a part of me
With your monstrous ways of dealing things carelessly
Every time I try to do something right
You prevent me from freeing my soul by suppressing anything containing light
Abusing my soul and taking over my mind
You fill my essence with feelings that are so unkind
I want freedom from fighting, I want to feel right
But you give me horrendous ideas that keep me awake all night
You’re my sub-conscious temptation
That prevents me from following the path of redemption
Restraining the prerogative to do things my way
You have fulfilled your notion to lead me astray

More than many. Very nice.

Is it contradictory?
Good conscience V's the bad?

yes

yes very nice

Remeber what you told me get a life
get a doctor
get a life
and like you told that girl stick to math
that is all she going to be good at