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Position:Home>Poetry> Any ideas for a title?Question:Eyes wide as soup plates My finger tips are trembling This convoluted deck Lies exploding within It does not cease its wicket smirk But mocks the irony itself My eyes blink, But only for a second They open to cold vengeful nights Seeping through old rusty cracks Engulfing my soul My eyes glaze over. As eccentric as it seems The dirt under my nails are resting spirits Scraped from their mothers’ womb Time is gone; it sifts through the curved glass I bit the crisp peach Divulging my thirst for its nectar And just like that The cards are dealt. Any ideas for a title, and what do you think of this poem? Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Eyes wide as soup plates My finger tips are trembling This convoluted deck Lies exploding within It does not cease its wicket smirk But mocks the irony itself My eyes blink, But only for a second They open to cold vengeful nights Seeping through old rusty cracks Engulfing my soul My eyes glaze over. As eccentric as it seems The dirt under my nails are resting spirits Scraped from their mothers’ womb Time is gone; it sifts through the curved glass I bit the crisp peach Divulging my thirst for its nectar And just like that The cards are dealt. Any ideas for a title, and what do you think of this poem? I think the best title for this peice should be "untitled". Sometimes we get so influenced and in depth in our writing, that we just put everthing out there. This poem doesn't have a direct topic, so it is best to leave it untited. If you try to put a title to it, it may not fit it as well Stupid World I think "Queen of Spades" would be an excellent title. |