Another poem...haiku?

Question:i dont really like this one.
Im not good with the short poems.
but here it is:
Haiku:
Love is such a ride
You never know what’s to come;
But that’s the best part.

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help me improve?

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: i dont really like this one.
Im not good with the short poems.
but here it is:
Haiku:
Love is such a ride
You never know what’s to come;
But that’s the best part.

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help me improve?

How much description can you put in seventeen syllables? It's great as it is because it communicates a state of mind, what the best poems of any style do.

maybe more description

ditto: needs more description

considering the restrictions not bad but try listing your feelings on what you have to write and then using the key factors to string the poem round it might show a little more heart and be less contrived. I would still give it 6 out of 10

ditto2: needs more description

a bit plain.......try being as creative as yu can without being boring...........for example:
He wants to stick his
fingers in, deep inside and
lick them dry...Oh my!

i can feel your heart
flutter against mine beating
to an unknown tune....

one eye opened,
one eye closed scared to go all
the way and see love.

we share secrets no-
one will ever know about.
don't open your mouth....

no fear of lost if
i gave it my best shot. I
know that's what counts.

scared to be spread and
torn apart, seen all the way
can't do it ...No way!