Poem you saw earlier with a rewritten last stanza?

Question:my broken head

Open spaces
disappearing
walls are closing in i'm fearing
caught in my own web
lost inside my broken head

trapped in my own
web of lies
and i have got
no alibi
lost inside my own head

burns like fire
stings like hate
no one understands
this fit of rage

over-reacting
not this time
but held back
she is so lucky

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: my broken head

Open spaces
disappearing
walls are closing in i'm fearing
caught in my own web
lost inside my broken head

trapped in my own
web of lies
and i have got
no alibi
lost inside my own head

burns like fire
stings like hate
no one understands
this fit of rage

over-reacting
not this time
but held back
she is so lucky

I like the first part, but the last stanza (both) seems like you could do better. Maybe leave it for a bit then come back and read it aloud.
Nice work:)

Ya thats probably better..