Poem i would love some feedback on?

Question:my broken head

Open spaces
disappearing
walls are closing in i'm fearing
caught in my own web
lost inside my broken head

trapped in my own
web of lies
and i have got
no alibi
lost inside my own head

burns like fire
stings like hate
no one understands
this fit of rage

anger bubbling
an evil potion
ready for battle
i'm so ready

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: my broken head

Open spaces
disappearing
walls are closing in i'm fearing
caught in my own web
lost inside my broken head

trapped in my own
web of lies
and i have got
no alibi
lost inside my own head

burns like fire
stings like hate
no one understands
this fit of rage

anger bubbling
an evil potion
ready for battle
i'm so ready

thats SUPER-DUPER!!! :P FANTABI-TOISES :)
ITS JUST LIKE ROBERT BURNS!!
OMG YOU SOUND LIKE SHAKESPEAR!!!!
heehehehehehehhe!!! keep writing and you can become the next j.k.rowling!!! :P

VERY well writen and creative but a little scary!

I like everything except the "I'm so ready" line.

I like it....1-10 scale......a 7. Go you!!

very intense...

nice job, i felt your pain

what have you been drinking girl? can i join?

This is amazing! I love it! Being a writer myself, this really really good! Really intense...great word choice! Keep up the GREAT work!
=]

I love it!
It's a little confusing in the 3rd stanza but over all its really good.

i liked it a lot!!! you know how to write a poem

what's this about?

i like it. it has a nice rhythm to it.

Intense. I think you should re-do the last verse though.

Its pretty good! I have a friend who writes poetry and he tells me this kind of stuff all the time. And to me, i don't know if its right or not, but it seems this poem is talking about some1 who has made mistakes in life, but as he tries to resolve them, new ones present themselves.. and then it gets really frustrating for the person, cause his life just won't get together n' stuff... i don't know. But life is full of problems, the best we can do is to hold on to the guardrail- and walk the steps.