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Question:Trust

i trust there's nothing in my shoe
that could possibly bite my toes in two
is there maybe something in my coke
that could kill or even make me choke
i may could end up lying dead
i've no idea what's in that bread
there's a part of me that feels insane
everytime i board a plane
how safe can driving really be
when any nut could veer towards me
i never trust hot air balloons
they're easy targets for rifle loons
i trust so many things I know I must
it's all summed up with "in God we trust"

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Trust

i trust there's nothing in my shoe
that could possibly bite my toes in two
is there maybe something in my coke
that could kill or even make me choke
i may could end up lying dead
i've no idea what's in that bread
there's a part of me that feels insane
everytime i board a plane
how safe can driving really be
when any nut could veer towards me
i never trust hot air balloons
they're easy targets for rifle loons
i trust so many things I know I must
it's all summed up with "in God we trust"

holy sh**! thats great dude! I LOVE IT its so true so real!

i loved it! the rhyming scene is great!
i'm guessing you have trust issues lol
but it's a really good poem.

thats pretty cool and interesting.is it all about trusting little things in life?

I think its good nut the language can be a bit...basic
keep on going

puuuurty good. Keep up the good work.

i like it but it does'nt flow well.
try changing it to:
I trust there's nothing in my shoe
that could bite my toes in two
is maybe something in my coke
that could kill or make me choke

see how that flows a little better. i'd follow a pattern similar to that

It all sound great but you lost the flow at the end
how about
To trust these things, I know I must,
it's all summed up in God we trust.

I am no poet, but i like your work,
It's simple and straight forward.
Hope you continue to compose more.

Wow I like it.
Very unique.
Nice work:)