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Question:Molly's Day
By Semper Fi Reborn
(On request for my friend Reenie)

Declare this the day
That Spring reveals it's color chart
A day when fall has put away it's brooding
Giving way to aromatic growth
Can you smell the instruments of joy?

Can we sing the song of your life?
Take pleasure in the melodic tones of life
And living
Laughing abundantly in the grasp
Of intelligent insanity
In the guise of bliss
Wearing a rose petal as a raincoat
Smiles
We deliver on this Day for Molly


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Molly's Day
By Semper Fi Reborn
(On request for my friend Reenie)

Declare this the day
That Spring reveals it's color chart
A day when fall has put away it's brooding
Giving way to aromatic growth
Can you smell the instruments of joy?

Can we sing the song of your life?
Take pleasure in the melodic tones of life
And living
Laughing abundantly in the grasp
Of intelligent insanity
In the guise of bliss
Wearing a rose petal as a raincoat
Smiles
We deliver on this Day for Molly

Oooh...intelligent insanity! Man that grips me. I love it. Brother, your imagry, the depth of your verbiage is just as delicious as wearing a rose petal raincoat would be. Molly will be so tickled pink we may have to name another hue. A beautiful and lyrical poem that just trickles into the senses like the refreshing first sip of sparkling water on a thirt starved tongue. Brilliantly and eloquently written!

God bless, Pami

This is a really great poem' and i know Molly will be delighted with such a great poem' from a great Man our Semper Fi..

THANK YOU!!! X1,000!!!
I'm full of goose bumps and gratitude!!
Thank God, and Thank you, for spreading words of JOY!!
And mostly for my friend, MOLLY!!!!
(((HUGS))) to all who value friendship! And to those who will learn.
(((SEMPER))) Thanks, friend!

Bless you both a million times over. I am so grateful to have a friend like Reenie. So very kind of you Semper! I don't know what to say. :)

Dear Semper Fi,

I know you wrote this one but this one is above and beyond excellence. This one jumped off the page of spring. I felt the sun shining and flowers blooming. I felt like it truly was a spring day!!!
Your talent continues to astound me!!! I love to write but I would be too ashamed to share it here!!! I thank God for those who's gift is in such abundance!!! Please continue to bless us with such works of art!!!

This is a wonderful poem with such heartwarming imagery. It doesn't get much better than "laughing abundantly in the grasp...Of intelligent insanity...In the guise of bliss". Molly's Day is universally a day in the beginning of Spring so beautifully created in the words of the first stanza. I join with you in singing "the song of your (her) life" because i am so taken by your poem. Molly is very fortunate to have such a lovely tribute. Thank you

I used to write poetry like that ! The thing's we loose with old age !
~OM~

very beautiful, even though you can't hear it, i'm applauding you. she will love it!!!!!!!God bless you!