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Question:Hang On
Written by Semper Fi Reborn
(by request of Kychick & Searcher)

God knows
He knows your pain
He hears your prayers
You must sustain

Be of faith
Let no doubt come
Give praise to Him
Who gave His Son

Your God
Is the God I serve
Lord God of Host
He who deserves
All praise
All glory and thanks thereof
He heals our pain
Everlasting love

Don't you fret
All hope is not gone
You with faith in God
Just hang on

Just hang on


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Hang On
Written by Semper Fi Reborn
(by request of Kychick & Searcher)

God knows
He knows your pain
He hears your prayers
You must sustain

Be of faith
Let no doubt come
Give praise to Him
Who gave His Son

Your God
Is the God I serve
Lord God of Host
He who deserves
All praise
All glory and thanks thereof
He heals our pain
Everlasting love

Don't you fret
All hope is not gone
You with faith in God
Just hang on

Just hang on

That made my eyes burn. I don't mean that in a negative way at all...=0(

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that is so sweet semper fi, that's sure to make her smile. i know she can use all the well wishes that she can possibly get at a time like this. God bless.

Nice one...I'm ignorant to what is wrong with her, but whatever it is I know that God is by her side.

Wow.....I love it.
Very nice work:)

Very nice!

You have written from your heart and I hope she is able to read this soon. Blessing to you, my Brother.

Thank you dear Brother Semper! Brought tears to my eyes. It is my prayer our Debra is soon well enough to read these beautiful words.

I know she has suffered terribly. I pray she finds the strength to "hang on" and recovers. Her Husband and two little sons need her desperately.

Whatever her fate, Sister Debra resides in the arms of God. I am sure she is one of His most beloved.

((Semper))

This is just so profoundly stirring, and I type this with burning eyes and a heart full of prayers for this lady everyone seems to regard so highly. I am longing to meet her, and so I have been praying day and night she comes out of her coman and that God will bring her into the fullness of His healing and recovery. Oh not just to meet her, I didn't mean it that way, but for her husband and for her two children. God bless you for your loving heart. I know that somehow the angels will send her the messages of our hearts where out own words cannot go. Love and God bless you my friend. Pami

Amen !
~OM~

Wow, that is really a beautiful poem!

Wonderfully heartfelt and beautiful. Have been reading a lot of postings about "Debra" and even though I am not familiar with her, she is obviously a very special person.

My prayers go out to her family.

Yes, Debra will surly love it. thanks for the kindness you are showing. this poem she will keep and treasure I am sure. God Bless.

Semper FI! I love the poem. I'm trying to figure out how to do a YouTube Video for Debra from everyone here and I'd like to use your poem in the video.

Thank you so much for your wonderful poem.

I don't know if you know this, but Debra writes poetry. If you have a link to her profile, go to her 360 and read some of her poetry.

Thanks again!

In the situation I am this also brings deep comfort...I've been sitting around, feeling sorry for myself because I'm unable to work... It just shows that some of us CAN go back to work pretty soon! (Many are unable ever to return to work.) You always manage to put *MY* life into perspective.....THANKS!! (((SEMPER)))
Hope you and yours are well!
HEY! How about a poem of the g-kid's activities??? That would be fun!!

Bravo, Semper, Bravo!!!!

Your poem is amazingly like a prayer....read it again with that in mind. I could see people in a church reciting this. Glorius!

Your end line 'just hang on' is very good....but when you repeated it again all by itself, at the very end, made it dynamic and gave 100% more emphasis to the 'prayer'. You, sir, are good! More and more!

That is very good. What a lovely piece.

Semper Fi Reborn,
God has truly given you a gift by which you are able to reach all who encounter your words from the heart. You most certainly have not "buried your talents" and you will be well rewarded by our Lord when He returns. Continue to run the race until that glorious day...looking forward to meeting you on the way up!
Blessings.