Ah i need help!!!! on my poem its due 3-17-08?

Question:What do u think so farand if u wna help tht'd b PERFECT :D

They say the sky is my limit, but there are footprints on the moon. One day I'll leave here,maybe soon, to grow on and be better thing with my ambition and my golden wings.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: What do u think so farand if u wna help tht'd b PERFECT :D

They say the sky is my limit, but there are footprints on the moon. One day I'll leave here,maybe soon, to grow on and be better thing with my ambition and my golden wings.

They say is a bad beginning; who are they

The Universe is my World; the Earth mine to know; When I leave here, I will .......

it's awesome...i think it's perfect..

Avoid cliches, "the sky is the limit."

i like it,
but for help, i dunno im not a poet but i woulod say ryme more. =D