Another poem, feed back please?

Question:Free

just dive in
let the water catch you
just jump into
the ocean

swim free and wild
act like a child
just be yourself
and let go

go with the flow
let the waves move you
let the current drift you
far away

let the sunset
in the horizon
you can't stop it
so don't fight it

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Free

just dive in
let the water catch you
just jump into
the ocean

swim free and wild
act like a child
just be yourself
and let go

go with the flow
let the waves move you
let the current drift you
far away

let the sunset
in the horizon
you can't stop it
so don't fight it

its really beautiful , it really speaks
keep writing wonderful

I like them =]

You should keep writing!