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Question:Over-reacting is still reacting.

Better then acting like it doesn't matter.

The reaction of reacting is confusing.

Or is it the way I think that's confusing?

I'm lost at this point.

Should I continue to care?

It's not a choice if I do or not,
I just can't help it.

Ugh, I'm thinking too much.,
but it's my reaction.

You're my over-reaction.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Over-reacting is still reacting.

Better then acting like it doesn't matter.

The reaction of reacting is confusing.

Or is it the way I think that's confusing?

I'm lost at this point.

Should I continue to care?

It's not a choice if I do or not,
I just can't help it.

Ugh, I'm thinking too much.,
but it's my reaction.

You're my over-reaction.

Everything is fine until

It's not a choice if I do or not,
I just can't help it. [this just seems meaningless compared to the first of the entry]

Ugh,[minus the ugh.] I'm thinking too much.,
but it's my reaction.

You're my over-reaction. [this is a wonderful ending]

you are trying too hard.

sounds like you need to work on some sleep.

I'm lost but I might be over reacting

What?

one thing is proper word usage

ha! ha! you think your are kate hudson? or reese witherspoon? sorry, chick! you are not!! hollywood bound so do not delude yourself!!

Nothing , sounds good, is my reaction

Wow! That was really good!
But even better if it rhymed!
Hope this helps!