Can Someone Tell Me If This is a Good Poem?

Question:lost another. Monday bloody Monday. all but ending. Twenty-three hang myself. Snowdrifts 6 feet high. 20 deaths limped on my back during my four. eating rotten wood and clay, mushroom caves and decorations made of cocaine. Which makes today just another day.

1:00pm---PROZAC ---- 3:00pm---VITASYNC---------7:00pm---CLARO... soon the loop begins ---PROZAC----VITASYNC----CLAROCET......a... a glass of Orange juice to wash it all down.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: lost another. Monday bloody Monday. all but ending. Twenty-three hang myself. Snowdrifts 6 feet high. 20 deaths limped on my back during my four. eating rotten wood and clay, mushroom caves and decorations made of cocaine. Which makes today just another day.

1:00pm---PROZAC ---- 3:00pm---VITASYNC---------7:00pm---CLARO... soon the loop begins ---PROZAC----VITASYNC----CLAROCET......a... a glass of Orange juice to wash it all down.

I think ur crazy

WTF ???

Yes.

You might try focusing on positive things before you dip your Quill into the ink... LOL!

do you need help,cause it sounds as if you are talking about yourself

I like it well enough... watch out for prozac, have you tried zoloft?

good but again bit dark but im not sure mixing the drugs will help

This is a poem to describe the distortion of rationality by suffering. Good poem,

SHOULD HAVE BEEN MILK BUT SERIOUSLY STILL DONT KILL YOUR SELF

This is twisted how many drugs are you on? Are you being treated for psychiatric problem?

I think you'd get on better if you concentrated on one piece at a time instead of twenty.

They're honest..... but I don't like them..... sorry.....

Well, dear, the cocaine is a bit scary. I hope you're okay. this is a strange poem. Are you asking for help?

i like it.
its LIFE.
[:
and its interesting.

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Pretty good.
I think you could make it better though.
Nice work:)