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Question:warm hugs,
soft tender kisses,
all night mid night phone calls,
mid afternoon visits,
thinking he felt about her,
the way she felt about him,
these are all the things she misses,
of a love once had,
lost.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: warm hugs,
soft tender kisses,
all night mid night phone calls,
mid afternoon visits,
thinking he felt about her,
the way she felt about him,
these are all the things she misses,
of a love once had,
lost.

how about removing all night?

warm hugs,
soft tender kisses,
midnight phone calls and
mid afternoon visits,
thinking he felt about her,
the way she felt about him,
these are the things she misses,
of a love once had...
lost.

i feel you!

really good

Very emotional!