Another poem from the realm of Larouxe... Can you read it for me?

Question:Now See Life

Force Devine
All derived
From Love alive
Show forth the way
All words are said
Will you say
Reset the clock
Devise the plot
Sitting, waiting
Never helped
So we will rise
Above
This cumbered love
To realms of Air
Fair is fair
Lies be true
I have life
What have you?

I know it is really short compared to me others but… I didn’t feel right about surrounding it with anymore but this one. One is all that’s needed here.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Now See Life

Force Devine
All derived
From Love alive
Show forth the way
All words are said
Will you say
Reset the clock
Devise the plot
Sitting, waiting
Never helped
So we will rise
Above
This cumbered love
To realms of Air
Fair is fair
Lies be true
I have life
What have you?

I know it is really short compared to me others but… I didn’t feel right about surrounding it with anymore but this one. One is all that’s needed here.

LYLAC, if you have read any poems, you must have realized that the most famous poets, very rarely had a clear title, or a clear message to their poems.
They wrote it in such a way as to help the reader understand life for themselves. As in have more effort, no one is an expert, as I'm sure your not either.
Every person has their own outlook on a poem, let others have theirs.

To the writer of This poem, very well done indeed, please keep showing people your world!

ok. i read it. yea, its pretty short. im talking about the lines too.

It has a quick flow but that is not necessarily a bad thing. It had rhythm and it rhymes in spurts... I know all poems do not rhyme but sometimes it nice when they do... the rhythm is good, I say yet again and I love the imagery. You have been producing more and more quality of late Rouxe.

It is short, but short and sweet; or, should I say bittersweet. I love "So we will rise Above This cumbered love To realms of Air". It's a very thought provoking, meaningful poem, very beautiful. And you are right, it deserves to stand alone. You have so much talent. Thank you.

There is no point. As a poet you must ALWAYS show a clear point. The name does not fit with the message and the message is not clear to the reader. If you insist on keeping with this, then you must put forth SOME effort to improve yourself!

this wasnt my least fav but it was not me fav... i liked your wolf poems when are they coming back?

Hmmm If you have life...does that leave me with death?..Hmmm *shakes magic eight ball* All signs point to yes

Sparse is good, if you know how to do it. This is what I'm talking about for you, your verge to Ace of Cups. However, I know you, and you're really not that suited to minimalistic poetry. This isn't one of those times that I find myself surprised, sorry. Oh, and it's spelled "divine." Love you, Rouxe.