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Question:how can i make this poem
it talks about Rachel carson she was a Marine biologist , scine writer and environmentalist

When you were a small girl you love to hear your mom talk to you about ponds, fields, and forests

Oh how you loved to spent time exploring around your farm and writing
You could spent the whole day searching for strange creatures so you could study them

And how proud you were when you first got your story published when you were 10 !
You were a quiet, private person, fascinated with the workings of nature from a scientific and aesthetic point of view.

High school was hard people look at you weird as if you were a strange animal like that one you found yesterday in the pond . But that didn’t stop you from being one of the top of your class of forty-four students

When you got to college you knew that studying English wasn’t your thing
You have discovery a new world biology
But that didn’t mean you had stop contributing to the school's student n


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: how can i make this poem
it talks about Rachel carson she was a Marine biologist , scine writer and environmentalist

When you were a small girl you love to hear your mom talk to you about ponds, fields, and forests

Oh how you loved to spent time exploring around your farm and writing
You could spent the whole day searching for strange creatures so you could study them

And how proud you were when you first got your story published when you were 10 !
You were a quiet, private person, fascinated with the workings of nature from a scientific and aesthetic point of view.

High school was hard people look at you weird as if you were a strange animal like that one you found yesterday in the pond . But that didn’t stop you from being one of the top of your class of forty-four students

When you got to college you knew that studying English wasn’t your thing
You have discovery a new world biology
But that didn’t mean you had stop contributing to the school's student n

i see potential in it. but it sounds too much like a report, not enough like poetry. let your juices flow. try not to think of it as an essay. think as if you are her, and write it from that point of view. keep open. good luck =)