Plz help with my personification poem!!?

Question:i kind of only hve a little so far:

Beauty lives deep past her soul,
Her surface shining perfectly so.
But who knew that beneath her flawlessness
Her heart is as black as coal?

i need more lines but i cant think of any. plz offer some suggestions?
thanks so much

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: i kind of only hve a little so far:

Beauty lives deep past her soul,
Her surface shining perfectly so.
But who knew that beneath her flawlessness
Her heart is as black as coal?

i need more lines but i cant think of any. plz offer some suggestions?
thanks so much

Her eyes are deep with sin
Her mind is like the wind
flowing in different directions
On the outside so pure and sweet
underneath she just wants defeat

Her smile may seem perfect
but her words are hurtful and mean
Her laugh is gorgeous
but the meaning is horrific
She is a girl that is perfect at sight
but underneath it all she is just
a fright.

As much as she resents me,
I know only how much she needs me.
For the pain that lies beneath,
Lies a soul deep in grief.

So now she knows how powerful love is,
and how the feeling of the touching lips.
She yearns for me to support her now,
And finally understands my love art thou.

haha well im at work and shouldnt be online. Came up with this in a matter of 2 mins. Let me know what you think!?

Cheers,