Can someone read my sonnet and tell me if its right.?

Question:An old pet has passed away
sick and weak with age
until his days fade
I shall remember him everyday

An old pet has met the end
sick and weak with age
because he passed away
I know have 1 less friend

An old pet has lost his heart
sick and weak with age
When I find a new replacement
Our souls will have to leave and part

An old pet has meet the fate to die
and now it's time to say goodbye.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: An old pet has passed away
sick and weak with age
until his days fade
I shall remember him everyday

An old pet has met the end
sick and weak with age
because he passed away
I know have 1 less friend

An old pet has lost his heart
sick and weak with age
When I find a new replacement
Our souls will have to leave and part

An old pet has meet the fate to die
and now it's time to say goodbye.

It's alright, but I must say I'm not really feeling it.
Use more creative wording and metephors/symbolism, that will make your writing more interesting.

Although, if that's not your style then don't listen to me.
That's just what I personally like.