When do yout think this poem is appropriate to give to a WOMAN?

Question:A WOMAN

In any land a man must understand a love women,
they could never be selfish, never heartless, because they produce children.
A helpful respectful friend is what most look for in their men
In the end u always receive what you send,
never use or abuse
A WOMAN

No matter how strong a man may be,
he's not wise if he dies and never see,
his duty, a woman's beauty in mind, body, and soul
the heart goes cold, life grows old without the love of
A WOMAN

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: A WOMAN

In any land a man must understand a love women,
they could never be selfish, never heartless, because they produce children.
A helpful respectful friend is what most look for in their men
In the end u always receive what you send,
never use or abuse
A WOMAN

No matter how strong a man may be,
he's not wise if he dies and never see,
his duty, a woman's beauty in mind, body, and soul
the heart goes cold, life grows old without the love of
A WOMAN

Of course "woman knows just who and what she is " if she is self-confident, self assuring, and generous of heart. Those kind of women don't neet "some male reminding her", but....

We are human.

Like all humans, no matter the gender, we like to be VALIDATED our worth. Humans have the NEED to know we count as one "special" person to another person's life beyond the other billions of people. We like to be reminded not just because we know or that we want to assume.

So you give this poem to the lady you love because it is from your heart. It is the sincerity and the love in what you are giving. It is not intended for commercialism or because I have to, but for the very fact you took the time to let your Miss know she does have worth and value to YOU

This is appropriate to give to a woman that you've been dating for a couple of months. And also that you've gotten to feel for her pretty well.

Very sweet.

Aloha from Down Unda!
Except as lyrics in a tune, poetry is ALWAYS inappropriate!
[yuck...***barf***...ughhh!]
Best wishes~

I can understand what you are trying to convey to the reader. Unfortunately the presentation leaves much to be desired.

Your heart is in the right place when you attempted this piece, though it requires a lot of work before you give it to any girl.

Remember a lot of people will read your work if it is presented in an educated manner. (Poets and poetry readers can be strange bedfellows at times)

My advice is not to give this particular draft to any woman. A woman knows just who and what she is without some male reminding her.

Have a read of it again and see if you would like to receive it if you were a woman.

Do not give up, there is a poet in all of us.

Robert

Anytime its what all women like to hear

I hear what your heart is saying and that's what makes a great poem.... the first avatar is right! At least a couple of months if you're giving it TO her. You might want to put it in a portfolio of your writings (something like that) and then whoever, whenever, can look through it! Good one, anyway!

i say the same as the other people...when you have been dating her for at least 5-8 months...but that is just what i think??

you just gave it to thousands of women....
i love that poem.
i guess you know how to treat your women!
if anybody does not appreciate those words then i dont know