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Question:Little Suzie Mumblepie
often paused to wonder why.

"Why's that man there got no hair?
Why do clouds float in the air?"

"Why's the sun so awfully hot?
Why's that doggie got those spots?"

"Why's that man sleep on the street?
Why's there no shoes on his feet?"

"Why are some folks rich or poor?
Why did Daddy go to war?"

Why and why and why and why.
Her mommy answers with a sigh:

"Because."


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Little Suzie Mumblepie
often paused to wonder why.

"Why's that man there got no hair?
Why do clouds float in the air?"

"Why's the sun so awfully hot?
Why's that doggie got those spots?"

"Why's that man sleep on the street?
Why's there no shoes on his feet?"

"Why are some folks rich or poor?
Why did Daddy go to war?"

Why and why and why and why.
Her mommy answers with a sigh:

"Because."

I absolutely love it!!! It is truly something that I would like to have written.
I understand the point of view perfectly. Good for you. There are no corrections I would make at all! Great job.
Have you been the mother of a four year old before? LOL
I have one I would like to share with you on much the same topic. I will post tomorrow, okay? Definitely star for you!

I think it rocks.

Very interesting.

I really like it.
Nice Work:)

Delightful

I think is very sweet!
Good for you ,i am not an expert but and keep writing.

I like it. It's adorable.

Very good. Love the turn it takes in the 4th stanza.

It's as if you nailed the world right on its head. There are so many inexplicable problems out there and your poem expresses the trouble with finding answers or even the reason why those problems are there. It's great, but you should expand it and at least mention death. But overall, it was awesome!

Well done. You did a nice job rhyming related topics. I enjoy it because it's light-hearted but not superficial.