Something a touch erotic. Adults only please. How is it.?

Question:"playing rough"

Sometimes I can think of,
the things that get me hot.
Some are pretty simple,
Most take a lot of thought.
One thing I can tell you,
I've the courage just to play.
My games tend to be rough,
I call them all sublime.
I do not go into extremes,
just a little pain and play.
You would never go to far,
Just to make me scream.
I love you my precious girl,
we never hurt too much.
With some practice and control,
you'll become my dominatrix.
You'll learn to control me,
my tears will fall like rain.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "playing rough"

Sometimes I can think of,
the things that get me hot.
Some are pretty simple,
Most take a lot of thought.
One thing I can tell you,
I've the courage just to play.
My games tend to be rough,
I call them all sublime.
I do not go into extremes,
just a little pain and play.
You would never go to far,
Just to make me scream.
I love you my precious girl,
we never hurt too much.
With some practice and control,
you'll become my dominatrix.
You'll learn to control me,
my tears will fall like rain.

yes.
and why can't there be more boys like you?

its softly and nice, good job

its a good poem
did you write it yourself
i enjoyed it

So ?

its alright, not really rated x though. rated x would be more like

first we get to ******** then we go down and ******
ill take my whip and *** to **** and get it **** then ******

if my husband read that to me id either laugh at him or kick him

You would never go to far,

It should be never go too far

Don't really like it.

Nice....the two of you are very happy by the sounds of it:)

SOOOoOoOoOoO did u come up with that buy ur self. Give yourself a .......... apple..... awkward

well for starters what exactly is your question? a question usually starts with t1 of the following words: what,who,where,why,do,is?? is your question reguarding sports, &sports injuries?

That makes me laugh inside....

heh...is it only me who finds it amusing that the "adults only" question has twice as many answers as your toehrs?

not a bad poem, but i'm afraid i have no more constructive comments.

Lines 2 and 4 rhyme, but the rest of it doesn't rhyme regularly. The lines ending in "extremes" and "scream" are too far apart to have any effect. I know poems don't need to rhyme, but it would have a better effect if you'd make the rhyming consistent throughout, and the rhymes would work well in a poem like this, which is about games.

true

wow u could really make the girls go wild if you talk that on a normal basis

meaning

Awsome Poem

I liked your poem, but this is for:

ilivtige, For someone who is so critical towards other peoples
typos and errors, you forgot one of the 5 Ws
Who? What? Where? Why?and WHEN?

I found it boring.

why adults only? it doesn't seem that bad! it seemed interesting....there is no more i can say because i obviously cant relate to this...lol when i become an adult then I'll understand right? lol
~Grasshopper