Help mee with this poem!! how can i make it better and what do you think of it??

Question:this is for english homework due tomorrow so i need answers FASTT!!

Suicidal Friend:

with the trigger in her hand,
she contemplates a lot;
is her life worth it?
she seems to think not.
in just one quick second,
her life comes to an end.
is this how she wants to be remembered?
just another suicidal friend.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: this is for english homework due tomorrow so i need answers FASTT!!

Suicidal Friend:

with the trigger in her hand,
she contemplates a lot;
is her life worth it?
she seems to think not.
in just one quick second,
her life comes to an end.
is this how she wants to be remembered?
just another suicidal friend.

Just go back over your punctuation other then that it's very good and very sad.

your last 2 lines are really strong. I would just go over punctuation. very good :)

good job. I hope the poem isn't about you though.