Tell me what you think of this poem please?

Question:walking forward and
walking tall or
standing still and
feeling small
either way
I try to find
a way to think and
clear my mind
not much else
to say or do
trying hard
to say to you
Im happy for
the time we spent
and you always knew
just what i meant

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: walking forward and
walking tall or
standing still and
feeling small
either way
I try to find
a way to think and
clear my mind
not much else
to say or do
trying hard
to say to you
Im happy for
the time we spent
and you always knew
just what i meant

Wow what a great poem and i liked it a lot.I think you did a great job with your writing and with the words you choose' and it all came together nicely....Keep writing as your pretty darn good.,.,.

cute

Ver nicely written,everything blended in real well.Great job

Dude this is better than mine! oh and about mine I was just thinking if I was ever to make a promise to some chick what would I promise. Came up with it in like 5 mins? haha keep writing! you good as well.

cute :)

I write poems all the time, but your pattern in this is awesome! The words were put together so nicely, and it makes perfect sense. Good luck to you...and keep writing, you have talents! =D

thats very good...well done, keep it up

im kind of upset with the direction you took this poem, it could have been really good, like, something to do with the fact that this world needs a revolution now more than ever, or how nothing actually matters and once this world ends, nothing will have ever meant a thing. there are too many "i just don't know how to say this to you" poems. i LOVE the beginning up to "to say or do", and then you take it the wrong way.

it's so charming