Wednesday is not my day. how is this one.?

Question:"dark embrace"

Morosely I pass silent hours,
All around me lie dead flowers.
The mourning of my salty tears,
We were together all these years.

Black, my black I love you so,
Time has come we now must go.
Waiting for the time to come,
Where's the pain I call my home.

Shadows come and seem to call,
To lose you know I start my fall.
I feel the pain it burns so deep,
My resolve is getting weak.

Stuggling as I'm ripped apart,
I have no choice, it's time to part.
In the throes of dark embrace,
I can't seem to glimpse your face.

Repulsed by false harmony,
Blinded by the truth I see.
The wisdom of the power heard,
My dismal thoughts seem so absurd.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "dark embrace"

Morosely I pass silent hours,
All around me lie dead flowers.
The mourning of my salty tears,
We were together all these years.

Black, my black I love you so,
Time has come we now must go.
Waiting for the time to come,
Where's the pain I call my home.

Shadows come and seem to call,
To lose you know I start my fall.
I feel the pain it burns so deep,
My resolve is getting weak.

Stuggling as I'm ripped apart,
I have no choice, it's time to part.
In the throes of dark embrace,
I can't seem to glimpse your face.

Repulsed by false harmony,
Blinded by the truth I see.
The wisdom of the power heard,
My dismal thoughts seem so absurd.

i read all the answers...and no one seemed to have noticed your spelling mistakes! lol well...i wont point them out... when is my book gonna come again? i fergot! lol i spelled it wrong! *stomach growls* lol i need to eat! see ya later!

I really like it. It's morbid and dark. Something not so common in the world of poetry though. It's cool, keep on writing.

Dark and depressing, but I think that's what you're feeling right now. I hope you get better soon.

I am having a wonderful day, I am out of the hospital after 3 months, and alive. I also like your poem very much, you should be happy with it.

If you wrote that today, I say Wednesday is definitely not "not your day". Write on.

Love this poem, the ending is superb! A Great read!

Nice and dark :-)