Eternal Love ?

Question:I Look into your eyes only to loose myself
This little person everyone calls an elf.
The smile thats lights up your little face
Truely is my saving grace.
I capture your tiny hand and hold it close to my heart.
My precious children we will never part.
A part of me will always live in you.
When my time comes do not be blue.
Instead remember the story of a dove
You will feel my eternal love.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I Look into your eyes only to loose myself
This little person everyone calls an elf.
The smile thats lights up your little face
Truely is my saving grace.
I capture your tiny hand and hold it close to my heart.
My precious children we will never part.
A part of me will always live in you.
When my time comes do not be blue.
Instead remember the story of a dove
You will feel my eternal love.

Wow, after all the things I've been through lately, this is my "savior" of a write like only you could do my most angelic friend <3

Spoken straight from the heart and so very true of a great Mom *^_^*

I really miss and love ya girl @)~>~

Well done and by all means, KEEP PENNING!!!!!!!!!!!

A beautiful, wonderful, lovely thought...I love my children dearly too, but (had to say all those nice things first :P), I don't really like the poem :(

interesting,
someone extremely nice can only think so.

i love it it is so nice you know how to write poems not like some people that just write to write and not knowing wat they are doing you write on how you feel

Well done Ms. M. Well done indeed.

See, THIS is a great poem because it's HAPPY and UPLIFTING.... not just some teenager blabbering on about how lonely and depressed they are and how much anger they have.

YOUR poem is beautiful and lovely

(althought in the first line you should use "lose" not "loose")

Very nice. !!!!
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