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Position:Home>Poetry> I need help replacing a word on my poem?Question:The verse goes, Music is our life Love is the beat Together, unstoppable Apart incomplete I need to change unstoppable to something else, as it sounds too heroic, like superheroes unstoppable. Like another meaning for it, or perhaps some other word you may find would fit in better? Thanks. Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: The verse goes, Music is our life Love is the beat Together, unstoppable Apart incomplete I need to change unstoppable to something else, as it sounds too heroic, like superheroes unstoppable. Like another meaning for it, or perhaps some other word you may find would fit in better? Thanks. how about "harmoniously"? Unbreakable, FOREVER whole Relentless Inescapable Inevitable I think unstoppable actually works really well. how about "fulfilled"? Music is our life Love is the beat Together, Forever Apart incomplete Julie I agree with Mz_SO_CA ........ " whole " Now , this one's much better . Since your 1st line's 5 syllables , & this has to rhyme with that , & as "together" is already 3 , that leaves 2 , so -- 'Together , the sky ' or 'Together , we peak' or 'we win' if you like it . All the best . Together upbeat Apart incomplete. inseparable |