Ever ask yourself?

Question:Ever ask yourself,
Am I good enough?
Does everything that happens,
only make you more tough?
How did one person you thought you knew,
change completely
And only hurts you repeatly?
Is it too much to ask,
to just get your life back?
I know life isn't supposed to be easy,
I know it's not supposed to be perfect,
it just used to be so breezy.
Why's it so wrecked?
Ever ask yourself,
Will things change,
Or just remain the same?

What do you think about my poem?

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Ever ask yourself,
Am I good enough?
Does everything that happens,
only make you more tough?
How did one person you thought you knew,
change completely
And only hurts you repeatly?
Is it too much to ask,
to just get your life back?
I know life isn't supposed to be easy,
I know it's not supposed to be perfect,
it just used to be so breezy.
Why's it so wrecked?
Ever ask yourself,
Will things change,
Or just remain the same?

What do you think about my poem?

any boy that will be with you is so lucky

beautifully tragic(in a good way)
=]

*whistles* well, that's a good poem. it's a bit...sad, but you're a good writer.

Your poem is TERRIBLE, but I can teach you
how to write GOOD poems !!!
Come to Morphyne.com

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Ah, I remember those times.

You have a pretty good start, but I would refine it a bit more. This sounds kind of funny, but sometimes it is hard to write poems when you are full of emotion. The just tend to turn out like ranting.

One of my friends writes poems. I think the best ones she writes are when she waits at least a month or two before writing about a circumstance. Then she can think clearly about what she felt and communicate the feelings well. Know what I mean?

Repeatly is not a word.
I think a lot of people who want to express themselves turn to poetry because they think its easy, it just looks like a bunch of incoherent sentences with no need for syntactical correctness, but in reality good poetry is hard to get down. The best poems have a lot behind them both in content, and in style.
I like it.
By the way, I would never be brave enough to share my poems. Good for you.

I like it. Poetry is never ment to be critized in a good or bad way. It's just poetry! It is something beautiful and don't listen what others have to say. It's made me a stronger writer myself!

i like it. yes it could use some improvements but i understand what u mean, the concept, and the whole idea. i don't think a lot about that stuff but i know my dad does so your poem really got me thinking about a lot of things i should think about more. thanks

pretty good

umm you got tythem down; i suggest you work on updateing ur usage of words,