Thoughts on the intro and closing sentences in my poem?

Question:Just looking for contructive criticism or simply comments on the intro and closing sentences of my poem!

life isn’t always purple.
it isn’t usually
a bottled haze of instant plaid tuesdays

maybe one day
when things fall into place
we'll have our day
again.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Just looking for contructive criticism or simply comments on the intro and closing sentences of my poem!

life isn’t always purple.
it isn’t usually
a bottled haze of instant plaid tuesdays

maybe one day
when things fall into place
we'll have our day
again.

Interesting, can I hazard a guess at what it's about? Seeing as I don't have the full poem in front of me, I can't really say for sure, but I'll try anyway.
Purple usually refers to something unique, wild, interesting etc. as does plaid. You're saying life isn't always interesting and exciting etc and each day doesn't come in a "make your own" kit. I'm guessing that during the body of the poem you go into what makes life purple? I love your opening quote a lot, mainly because the fascinating images it depicts. I also enjoyed your closing. I was imagining the last part as a song, I even made up a little tune to it! In the last part you're menaing exactly what you are saying, I don't have to decode anything as far as I can tell. Congratulations! I can't wait to hear more from you!
Cheers!
-Peter

i would love to read the whole thing...sounds different and exciting. as for the intro - it makes you think, so i like it