What do you think? ( its a "poem" that i wrote)?

Question:Misery is a tool I use to dissassemble my head
I procrastinate in putting it together again
Seem to find strange comfort in the apathetic daze
Watching all my best ideas float within the haze

Grey day perfection, you darkened it for me
With the systematic slaughter of yourself
Grey day perfection, I can no longer see
Just how disassembled Ive become beneath the scalp

Slowly
In
Motion
Stop

Now I use this tool to dig inside your head
A masochistic cycle, Ive been struck again
Strong and impenitrable I am, in this daze
Shattering the mirrors that are shining through the haze

Grey day perfection, as perfect as can be
Are your words together as a string or on a leash?
The most perfect imperfection that I ever did see
For good or evil, your powers have found a way to reach...

Slowly
Stop
In
Motion

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Misery is a tool I use to dissassemble my head
I procrastinate in putting it together again
Seem to find strange comfort in the apathetic daze
Watching all my best ideas float within the haze

Grey day perfection, you darkened it for me
With the systematic slaughter of yourself
Grey day perfection, I can no longer see
Just how disassembled Ive become beneath the scalp

Slowly
In
Motion
Stop

Now I use this tool to dig inside your head
A masochistic cycle, Ive been struck again
Strong and impenitrable I am, in this daze
Shattering the mirrors that are shining through the haze

Grey day perfection, as perfect as can be
Are your words together as a string or on a leash?
The most perfect imperfection that I ever did see
For good or evil, your powers have found a way to reach...

Slowly
Stop
In
Motion

I realllly liked it, good job...

Grey day perfection, you darkened it for me
With the systematic slaughter of yourself

... that's my favourite line. Write some more! : )

i liked it a lot kinda creepy but good lol

its kinda creepy if you go for those thingss. but i like it its really creative and it paints images, veryy good indeed

It's really strange but I like it.

I like your style. I think you could make it flow a little better, but it 's good like this also.
Nice work:)