Do u lik my poem please help?

Question:where is the stress reliever who gets me emotinal when he says my name?
is he a non believer is lust his passion or game?
there's no doubt in my mind that my lonely days has came to an end
love is a secret and lust is hell send
may he not kill my soul for im in to deep
he keeps me restless sex he puts me to sleep
he keeps my mind occipied my heart is pounding sex
i feel like im dying im so weak is this a hex
and yet.. i still ask
where is the stress reliever that gets me emotional when he calls my name

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: where is the stress reliever who gets me emotinal when he says my name?
is he a non believer is lust his passion or game?
there's no doubt in my mind that my lonely days has came to an end
love is a secret and lust is hell send
may he not kill my soul for im in to deep
he keeps me restless sex he puts me to sleep
he keeps my mind occipied my heart is pounding sex
i feel like im dying im so weak is this a hex
and yet.. i still ask
where is the stress reliever that gets me emotional when he calls my name

It's beautiful
seriously.

Not good. Stop with the pshyco, dark, depressing poems.

it kool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i liked it lol

meh.

it's too out of order
the idea is perplexing but i think you did a well enough job to make sense out of it
but i think its... good

Cool. Sounds like you have a lot on your plate as you wrote this one, eh?