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The waves of depression are crashing down upon me.
But this pain I feel no one else can see,
Is it me? Could it be, maybe I am just crazy, out of my mind?
Is it me? Or is everyone I know just blind?
Is it me? Or is it all of mankind?
Or is it me who is blind?


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Is it me?

The waves of depression are crashing down upon me.
But this pain I feel no one else can see,
Is it me? Could it be, maybe I am just crazy, out of my mind?
Is it me? Or is everyone I know just blind?
Is it me? Or is it all of mankind?
Or is it me who is blind?

Well, it certainly gets your point across. I wish you were feeling better.

it's very poetic

Nice and catchy! Keep doing more I think you have potential.

It's AMAZING!! Love love love!? Very thought provoking!

I like it.
Nice work:)

Very good poem!