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Position:Home>Poetry> Can you give me feed back on this poem or song? What should it be, a song or poeQuestion:I don’t know how I’ve changed All I know is this is true I have changed Just for you I am blue Feeling caged Within this heart that cries for you Am I a memory simply faded Do you recollect the cherished encounters That time many, now so few What has changed Between us two. We once talked Without a clue, all the clues supplied too. Now not a clue, not a word, what has gone wrong With my heart’s song? Is it you that has flown away or have I simply walked away? Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I don’t know how I’ve changed All I know is this is true I have changed Just for you I am blue Feeling caged Within this heart that cries for you Am I a memory simply faded Do you recollect the cherished encounters That time many, now so few What has changed Between us two. We once talked Without a clue, all the clues supplied too. Now not a clue, not a word, what has gone wrong With my heart’s song? Is it you that has flown away or have I simply walked away? a poem definitely if it were to be a song, people wouldn't really pay attention to the lyrics and get focused on the music and melody. good job writing this the rhymes come together unforcefully and the message is kinda straight forward nice one =] poem, it's really Good! Nice Piece Of Work :) No offense but it might be better as a poem ......A good poem. I couldn't think of much of a genre for the words |