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Question:The clairvoyant said the two ugly step sisters

would both win the heart of The Prince

charged them a hundred each

for separate readings,

hoped they wouldn't talk to each other,

and hasn't been seen since.

On the night of the ball

Martha and Mabel's auras shone like moons,

magic crystals dangling to their knees,

their chakras highly tuned,

drove there in a limo

uttering positive affirmations,

stopped off for quick Kombucha teas

and colonic irrigations,

had hasty herbal infusions

before entering the ball,

then, to avoid confusion,

gave the therapist a call.

Cindy, on the other hand,

was so cool, like most poor girls,

drank milk to line her stomach

and wore her mother's pearls,

climbed in through the window

and blew a joint with the band,

then did a real bluesy one,

for which she received a huge hand.

Then exited just before midnight,

leaving her number in her slipper,

walked home, gutted the wine cask,


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: The clairvoyant said the two ugly step sisters

would both win the heart of The Prince

charged them a hundred each

for separate readings,

hoped they wouldn't talk to each other,

and hasn't been seen since.

On the night of the ball

Martha and Mabel's auras shone like moons,

magic crystals dangling to their knees,

their chakras highly tuned,

drove there in a limo

uttering positive affirmations,

stopped off for quick Kombucha teas

and colonic irrigations,

had hasty herbal infusions

before entering the ball,

then, to avoid confusion,

gave the therapist a call.

Cindy, on the other hand,

was so cool, like most poor girls,

drank milk to line her stomach

and wore her mother's pearls,

climbed in through the window

and blew a joint with the band,

then did a real bluesy one,

for which she received a huge hand.

Then exited just before midnight,

leaving her number in her slipper,

walked home, gutted the wine cask,

I loved it!! Do you have any more like that? You should seriously consider getting your stuff published. You have a very artistic mind. I'm a writer myself but mainly dabble in screenplays and novels. If you got any more, I would love to hear them.

you're good at making poems. i loved it!!

good one.................................you could write all the old storys /Fairytales in a modern style................make a book.................i love this one..............

nice one

good poem, but am running out of star.

u made that up that was weird good i like it