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Position:Home>Poetry> What does this say to you!?!?!?!?Question:What does this poem say to you?....what does it make you think about the person who wrote it? "His tears were once the only thing to make me cry but lying alone I am dying inside Am i only destined to relive the dreams I've held inside so darkened they seem Or can I one day walk alone And bear the brunt of all who can't see who weakened me with just one look One shortened breath that wrote a book All about the pain and hurt they see All of this when they look at me." -Unknown Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: What does this poem say to you?....what does it make you think about the person who wrote it? "His tears were once the only thing to make me cry but lying alone I am dying inside Am i only destined to relive the dreams I've held inside so darkened they seem Or can I one day walk alone And bear the brunt of all who can't see who weakened me with just one look One shortened breath that wrote a book All about the pain and hurt they see All of this when they look at me." -Unknown What I see when I read this is a person crying out to have someone be with them. They are lonely and tired of being that way. i think you should show sean the wicked irishmen what real poetry looks like. LOL I like it. Its very sad. it sounds like he did something that was disappointing to others. It's a very nice poem....It sounds like whoever wrote it is really sad and alone....and maybe is sick of people looking at them with pity instead of helping? That's very nice Shannon. It kinda reminds me of my favourite band's lyrics. DAMN, it's so sad and amazing. Nice work, you really got me there. Is it yours (now, really)? Pls, check out my question "Do you like this?" and make a comment about the poem I posted over there. |