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Question:Here's what I have so far:

Your voice is like a waterfall
So soothing to my ears
It calms my mind but yet sometimes
It makes me shed some tears
My love for you cannot be explained
Its length is just too long
We are tied together by a thread
A thousand armies strong...

What next?


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Here's what I have so far:

Your voice is like a waterfall
So soothing to my ears
It calms my mind but yet sometimes
It makes me shed some tears
My love for you cannot be explained
Its length is just too long
We are tied together by a thread
A thousand armies strong...

What next?

You are the guiding light
In the wake of the night
When fear grasps everything I know,
My heart tells me you are there
And all doubt fades away.

Doesn't really flow with the rest of your poem, but perhaps it can give you an idea for the rest of it.

Good Luck!