I wrote a poem and I am not really a poet but I need help with it .You can add t

Question:Take my hands
hold my thoughts
Let me stay here in peace
Don't pull away,Every thing will be ok
In your arms I lay me down to rest

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Take my hands
hold my thoughts
Let me stay here in peace
Don't pull away,Every thing will be ok
In your arms I lay me down to rest

my silly little grasshopper, you would let someone else finish your artwork? thats a no no.

with you by my side
I can be myself and know that you will not judge me
Or think me unkind

Within my soul
I'll always know,
That you'll be their beside me.

Shield me away,
Cover me whole,
For my love for you does the same.

Finish YOUR poem,
so that it's truely yours.
Then you may say, "Oh, yes it is mine!"
to the one who adores.