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Question: Watcha think be brutal (just kidding just be honest)!?
The rivers torrent was relentless
Beyond a distance!.!.!.the gushing water
I see!.

Separated,
Alone,
Upon this barren rock of stone!.
I recall moments before!.!.!. I was there too!.
But!.!.!.by God was I!.!.!.I saved!?
No! No! I am not!
There is still more to come!.!.!.
It!.!.!.it is the beginning!.

Quakened with fear or
Quakened by cold!?
Scared by death or
Scared to die!?
What is this monstrocity!?

Father!.!.!.!.!.
Father!.!.
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.



I know this may be corny and if im right just say its corny!.!.!.!.i just made it up less than 5minWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
hey!
dont be o negative!
its brilliant!
i am in a bit of a d and m mood, and read it slowly and thoughtfully, but i liked it!
keep writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com