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Question: What do you guys think of the poem i wrote!?
1st one : some lights go off
some lights go on
as i feel along i can be strong!.!.!.!.!.!.!.

you took ma hand
and me me relise that its
not always hard yeahhhhhh yeahhh
now as a go through a want to be there for you
a wish you were who you say you were

but now now the storys gone
its time to move on yeahhh

not a need to know just where to go
i want to be the one comes down to you
a want to be forsure the one who makes u smile

but now as you go you can see am here for you
a just need to say how a need to know

but now as we go along in life a can take you there
a can be the one who cares

a see you stareing now a want you to know who are a make you know where to go and run !
but as we go along, al never be to long just to say those words again and how you make me feel
you drive the way to go i know to long to far i want you to say just how a make u feel

now am just to far and am just away tonight give me one more chance to say a love you for who you areWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I dig itWww@QuestionHome@Com

Sorry, but it is really awful!. If you are interested in poetry, take a college creative writing class!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I dont like it, listen to immortal technique he has good lyricsWww@QuestionHome@Com

Now i'm gna steal your poem and make alot of money off it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is an informal poem but i like it though!.

Thanks for sharing!. Have a great day!Www@QuestionHome@Com

you call that mambo jambo!.!.!. a poem! geez, you think way too much of yourself!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sucks!.

I'd hate to be you right now!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

My opinion doesn't really matter but I thought it was sh!tWww@QuestionHome@Com