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Question: Is this expert I wrote good!? FYI I'm 16!?
Metamorphosis
When you grow older
you really learn more
about yourself such as
what you really want in life


Over the past couple of years
I feel like I have grown
and became a completely
different person

I would never imagine
that I am where I am now
I feel so smart and wise
though I'll look down on myself
5 years from now

I mean I haven't made that
much of a evolution or a
metamorphosis though
I feel like I have finally found

What what I have looking for
in my life, and it wasn't so much
a real world evolution though
more of a personal one

I used to feel like an
outcast in a way, used,
hurt many times many ways,
alone even in a crowd

I'm hardheaded when it
comes to change though
I'm finally open to it
because I know where I
want to go

I now know just to go
with the flow and I learned
if God doesn't think your
strong enough to survive the
path your on, he wouldn't have
even put you there

I finally feel confident,
strong, risky(in my own terms),
open to more people, and
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Interesting!.Especially for your age!.You should write poems also!.You might amaze yourself!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Everything is great except for the concept of waiting for your life to be gone for any amount of time, before you believe yourself to be wise!. Never wait to live, for we all wait to die!Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow, for the 100th time, this is the philo section, not the poetry sectionWww@QuestionHome@Com

Great!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!. Great especially for 16Www@QuestionHome@Com