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Question: I wrote this for my husbands birthday card i made him, what do you think!?
From the first day we met,
I knew I would love you!.
And since then,
my love for you has grown each day!.
Every struggle that comes our way,
The love we share,
Gives us the strength to embrace it,
And every time,
love takes us further,
then we could have ever dreamed!.
Everything you ever where
and have now become,
I am proud of!.
I am proud to be married to a man,
With a heart such as yours!.
Everything from your strength and character,
To your kindness and caring,
I admire and love!.



The love you give me is so incredible!.
It makes me look forward
to each and every day!.
I look forward to the family
we will one day share,
And to seeing you as the perfect father,
I know you will be!.
Thanks to you my life is blessed,
It has purpose and meaning,
It has hope and understanding!.
And I could never find the right words,
To express all that I feel,
Or how thankful I am,
For everything you are!.
But I know what we share will never fade!.
And that I shall love you forever!.
Happy birthday baby!.
I will always be there to wish you one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
here are my concerns; is your husband bright enough to understand it!? is he sensetive enough to give it thought!? and will your husband want to read it!? because i couldnt bear reading past the first line because it's long!. other than that, its perfect, deep, and sweet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's beautiful!.

DougWww@QuestionHome@Com

That is so cute!
You are truly in love and it's beautiful!.
I'm sure he will love it =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

You want an honest opinion from a guy's point of view!? You are not giving him a gift as much as you are giving him a task!. He is going to have to read this and pretend to be touched!. Otherwise, you are going to be upset on his birthday, nice!. Plus, he will be forced to save this thing!. Guys don't want to have to save birthday cards!. I know, not what you want to hear, but you did ask, and I am being honest!.

And another thing!. I agree with the other answer that said they couldn't stand to read past a couple of lines!. No offense intended, it is just so l o n g and repetitive!.Www@QuestionHome@Com