What do you think of this poem? and after do you think i should do the step?

Question: What do you think of this poem!? and after do you think i should do the step!?

what between us is two steps
but we never dire to take astep
you and me
just smiling
but what after it
time is ticking
but all we do is just stare
but what after
i'm waiting your step
and you waiting my step
why can't we just meet in the mid
love between us is undeniable
but so is our fear
fear of losing each other
so all what we do is stareWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It's a very good poem

Just some suggestions:

I would change the first line to "what lies between us !. !. !."

Second line I think you mean "dare to take a step"

Fifth line "but what COMES after!?" You should put the question marks on questions

Sixth line "I'm waiting FOR your step" (same with next line)Www@QuestionHome@Com